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future_guardian) wrote2010-09-11 09:04 pm
future_guardian) wrote2010-09-11 09:04 pm
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Writing Outline of the Day
All important outline points on my previous writing outline have been worked in. That was eleven pages of editing and I'm satisfied to a point.
-A Night to Remember-
1. Callix Ruelo is at the costume ball she was not invited to, and she makes short observations on how everything's perfect.
2. Then she realizes there is way too much tension for it to really be a perfect evening. She gets the feeling that Queen Esseme is going to snap and kill someone and Teyva (her former best friend's best friend, also a girl who hates her, makes her life miserable, etc.) is around the castle when death world rules usually dictate everyone killed together ends up on separate death worlds.
3. Teyva shows up and the evening goes quickly down the toilet, so to speak.
-A Night to Remember-
1. Callix Ruelo is at the costume ball she was not invited to, and she makes short observations on how everything's perfect.
2. Then she realizes there is way too much tension for it to really be a perfect evening. She gets the feeling that Queen Esseme is going to snap and kill someone and Teyva (her former best friend's best friend, also a girl who hates her, makes her life miserable, etc.) is around the castle when death world rules usually dictate everyone killed together ends up on separate death worlds.
3. Teyva shows up and the evening goes quickly down the toilet, so to speak.